- From: Sverdlov, Yakov <Yakov.Sverdlov@ca.com>
- Date: Thu, 13 Jul 2006 14:17:56 -0400
- To: "public-ws-policy@w3.org" <'public-ws-policy@w3.org'>
Received on Thursday, 13 July 2006 18:26:57 UTC
Title: Modify wording about a Web Service in the Introduction. Description: In the Introduction section, the wording of the Web Service definition "XML Web services-based system" contains a redundant word "XML". Justification: See the Description. Target: WS-Policy Framework, section 1. Introduction. Proposal: Change the wording from "in a XML Web services-based system" to "in a Web services-based system". The alternative solution would be to provide detailed definition of a Web Service (and some relevant definitions: requester, provider,...) in the section 2.4 Terminology. I think this solution will expand the scope of the document, and as such it is not well justified. Regards, Yakov Sverdlov CA
Received on Thursday, 13 July 2006 18:26:57 UTC