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NEW ISSUE: Modify wording in 1.1 Introduction for Framework document

From: Sverdlov, Yakov <Yakov.Sverdlov@ca.com>
Date: Thu, 13 Jul 2006 14:17:56 -0400
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To: "public-ws-policy@w3.org" <'public-ws-policy@w3.org'>
Title: 

Modify wording about a Web Service in the Introduction.

 

Description: 

In the Introduction section, the wording of the Web Service definition
"XML Web services-based system" contains a redundant word "XML".

 

Justification:

See the Description.

 

Target:

WS-Policy Framework, section 1. Introduction.

 

Proposal:

Change the wording from "in a XML Web services-based system" to "in a
Web services-based system".

 

The alternative solution would be to provide detailed definition of a
Web Service (and some relevant definitions: requester, provider,...) in
the section 2.4 Terminology. I think this solution will expand the scope
of the document, and as such it is not well justified.

 

 

Regards,

 

Yakov Sverdlov

CA
Received on Thursday, 13 July 2006 18:26:57 GMT

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