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NEW ISSUE: section 1.1 Goals section, rewording

From: Dale Moberg <dmoberg@us.axway.com>
Date: Wed, 12 Jul 2006 19:54:42 -0700
Message-ID: <97085FEE4C8BDB4AB6FA3E770EBC79BB11CB79@mail1.cyclonecommerce.com>
To: <public-ws-policy@w3.org>
 

 

Title - Remove misleading phrasing of section 1.1 Goals section
concerning the first goal

 

Description - 

 

Rework the following statement to be less misleading about what the
framework specification actually specifies.

Specifically, this specification defines the following:

*         An XML Infoset called a policy expression that contains
domain-specific, Web Service policy information.

 

Justification - 

 

This specification does not define those parts of a policy expression
that contain domain-specific Web Service policy information. It does not
define the full XML Infoset because it does not define policy assertions
themselves (just where they can be inserted)

 

Target - 

 

section 1.1 Goals sentence as above

 

Proposal - 

 

Something like:

Specifically, this framework specification defines the following:

*         An XML Infoset structure for the containers (called, policy
expressions) of Web Service policy assertions and associated
information. [The assertions themselves are elsewhere specified by
domain-specific policy specifications that make use of this framework.]

 

 

[1] Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-framework.h

tml?rev=1.3&content-type=text/html;%20charset=iso-8859-1 

[2] Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachment

http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-attachment.

html?rev=1.2&content-type=text/html;%20charset=iso-8859-1 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
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