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From: Prasad Yendluri via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 29 Sep 2006 13:42:16 +0000
To: public-ws-policy-eds@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1GTId6-0004wh-5T@lionel-hutz.w3.org>

Update of /sources/public/2006/ws/policy
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv18692

Modified Files:
	ws-policy-primer.html ws-policy-primer.xml 
Log Message:
More edits to address Paul's comments

Index: ws-policy-primer.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-primer.html,v
retrieving revision 1.14
retrieving revision 1.15
diff -u -d -r1.14 -r1.15
--- ws-policy-primer.html	28 Sep 2006 19:45:46 -0000	1.14
+++ ws-policy-primer.html	29 Sep 2006 13:42:13 -0000	1.15
@@ -700,7 +700,7 @@
           Policy. A policy expression consists of a <code>Policy</code> wrapper element and a
           variety of child and descendent elements. Child and descendent elements from the policy
           language are <code>Policy, All</code>, <code>ExactlyOne</code>
-          and <code>PolicyReference</code>. Other child elements of<code>Policy</code>,
+          and <code>PolicyReference</code>. Other child elements of <code>Policy</code>,
           <code>All</code> and <code>ExactlyOne</code> are policy assertions. (The <code>Policy</code>
           element plays two roles: wrapper element and operator.) Policy assertions can contain a
           nested policy expression. Policy assertions can also be marked optional to represent
@@ -1144,7 +1144,7 @@
         <p>The policy expression below is the combination of the two policy expressions attached to
           the <code>SecureBinding</code> WSDL binding and <code>RealTimeDataPort</code> WSDL port
           descriptions. The <code>#common2</code> policy expression has two policy alternatives. The
-            <code>#secure2</code> policy expression has two policy alternatives<code>.</code> The
+          <code>#secure2</code> policy expression has two policy alternatives. The
           combination of these two policies is equivalent to Contoso&rsquo;s secure policy in <a href="#basic-concepts-policy-expression"><b>2. Basic Concepts: Policy Expression</b></a> and has four policy alternatives. In other
           words, the combination of two policies is the cross product of alternatives in these two
           policies.</p>
@@ -1303,6 +1303,7 @@
         <p>Let us look at the anatomy of a policy assertion from the security domain. The policy
           expression in the diagram below uses the <code>sp:IssuedToken</code> policy assertion.
           This assertion illustrates the use of assertion parameters and nested policy.</p>
+
         <div style="text-align: center" class="figure"><br><img src="policy-assertion.jpg" alt="sp:IssuedToken Policy Assertion"><p style="text-align:left"><i><span>Figure 4-1. </span>sp:IssuedToken Policy Assertion</i></p><br></div>
         <p>The <code>sp:IssuedToken</code> element is a policy assertion that identifies the use of
           a security token &ndash; such as SAML token - issued by a third party for protecting messages. A
@@ -1413,7 +1414,6 @@
           <p>If an assertion has no wire- or message-level visible behavior, then the interacting
             participants may require some sort of additional non-repudiation mechanism to indicate
             compliance with the assertion. Introducing an additional non-repudiation mechanism adds
-
             unnecessary complexity to processing a policy assertion.</p>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -1878,15 +1878,6 @@
         <tbody>
           <tr>
             <td rowspan="1" colspan="1">
-              <code></code>
-            </td>
-            <td rowspan="1" colspan="1">
-              <code>http://www.w3.org/@@@@/@@/ws-policy</code>
-            </td>
-            <td rowspan="1" colspan="1">[<cite><a href="#WS-Policy">Web Services Policy Framework</a></cite>, <cite><a href="#WS-PolicyAttachment">Web Services Policy Attachment</a></cite>]</td>
-          </tr>
-          <tr>
-            <td rowspan="1" colspan="1">
               <code>mtom</code>
             </td>
             <td rowspan="1" colspan="1">
@@ -1928,7 +1919,7 @@
             <td rowspan="1" colspan="1">
               <code>http://www.w3.org/2006/05/addressing/wsdl</code>
             </td>
-            <td rowspan="1" colspan="1">[<cite><a href="#WS-AddressingPolicy">WS-Addressing Policy</a></cite>]</td>
+            <td rowspan="1" colspan="1">[<cite><a href="#WS-AddressingWSDL">WS-Addressing WSDL Binding</a></cite>]</td>
           </tr>
           <tr>
             <td rowspan="1" colspan="1">
@@ -2010,8 +2001,8 @@
           Addressing 1.0 - Core Recommendation is
           http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-ws-addr-core-20060509/. The <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-addr-core/">latest version of Web Services Addressing 1.0
             - Core</a> is available at http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-addr-core. </dd>
-        <dt class="label"><a name="WS-AddressingPolicy"></a>[WS-Addressing Policy] </dt><dd>
-          <cite><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/CR-ws-addr-wsdl-20060529/">Web Services Addressing - WSDL Binding</a></cite>, M. Gudgin, M. Hadley, T.
+        <dt class="label"><a name="WS-AddressingWSDL"></a>[WS-Addressing WSDL Binding] </dt><dd>
+          <cite><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/CR-ws-addr-wsdl-20060529/">Web Services Addressing 1.0 - WSDL Binding</a></cite>, M. Gudgin, M. Hadley, T.
           Rogers and &Uuml;. Yal&ccedil;inalp, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 29 May 2006. This version of
           the Web Services Addressing 1.0 - WSDL Binding is
           http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/CR-ws-addr-wsdl-20060529/. The <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-addr-wsdl">latest version of Web Services Addressing 1.0 -
@@ -2051,14 +2042,14 @@
         <dt class="label"><a name="WS-Policy"></a>[Web Services Policy Framework] </dt><dd>
           <cite><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy/">Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework</a></cite>, A. S. Vedamuthu, D. Orchard, M. Hondo, T.
           Boubez and P. Yendluri, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, @@,
-          @@@@ @@@@. This version of the specification of the
-          Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework specification is ws-policy-framework.html. The <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy/">latest version of
+          @@@@ @@@@. This version of the 
+          Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework specification is at http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy/. The <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy/">latest version of
             Web Services Policy 1.5 - Framework</a> is available at http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy/. </dd>
         <dt class="label"><a name="WS-PolicyAttachment"></a>[Web Services Policy Attachment] </dt><dd>
           <cite><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy-attach/">Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachment</a></cite>, A. S. Vedamuthu, D. Orchard, M. Hondo, T.
           Boubez and P. Yendluri, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, @@,
-          @@@@ @@@@. This version of the specification of the
-          Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachment specification is ws-policy-attachment.html. The <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy-attach/">latest version of
+          @@@@ @@@@. This version of the 
+          Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachment specification is at http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy-attach. The <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy-attach/">latest version of
             Web Services Policy 1.5 - Attachment</a> is available at
           http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy-attach/. </dd>
         <dt class="label"><a name="WS-RM-Policy"></a>[Web Services Reliable Messaging Policy] </dt><dd>

Index: ws-policy-primer.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/2006/ws/policy/ws-policy-primer.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -d -r1.12 -r1.13
--- ws-policy-primer.xml	28 Sep 2006 19:45:46 -0000	1.12
+++ ws-policy-primer.xml	29 Sep 2006 13:42:13 -0000	1.13
@@ -680,7 +680,7 @@
           Policy. A policy expression consists of a <code>Policy</code> wrapper element and a
           variety of child and descendent elements. Child and descendent elements from the policy
           language are <code>Policy, All</code>, <code>ExactlyOne</code>
-          and <code>PolicyReference</code>. Other child elements of<code>Policy</code>,
+          and <code>PolicyReference</code>. Other child elements of <code>Policy</code>,
           <code>All</code> and <code>ExactlyOne</code> are policy assertions. (The <code>Policy</code>
           element plays two roles: wrapper element and operator.) Policy assertions can contain a
           nested policy expression. Policy assertions can also be marked optional to represent
@@ -1123,7 +1123,7 @@
         <p>The policy expression below is the combination of the two policy expressions attached to
           the <code>SecureBinding</code> WSDL binding and <code>RealTimeDataPort</code> WSDL port
           descriptions. The <code>#common2</code> policy expression has two policy alternatives. The
-            <code>#secure2</code> policy expression has two policy alternatives<code>.</code> The
+          <code>#secure2</code> policy expression has two policy alternatives. The
           combination of these two policies is equivalent to Contoso’s secure policy in <specref
             ref="basic-concepts-policy-expression"/> and has four policy alternatives. In other
           words, the combination of two policies is the cross product of alternatives in these two
@@ -1838,15 +1838,6 @@
         <tbody>
           <tr>
             <td>
-              <code/>
-            </td>
-            <td>
-              <code>&nsuri;</code>
-            </td>
-            <td>[<bibref ref="WS-Policy"/>, <bibref ref="WS-PolicyAttachment"/>]</td>
-          </tr>
-          <tr>
-            <td>
               <code>mtom</code>
             </td>
             <td>
@@ -1889,7 +1880,7 @@
             <td>
               <code>http://www.w3.org/2006/05/addressing/wsdl</code>
             </td>
-            <td>[<bibref ref="WS-AddressingPolicy"/>]</td>
+            <td>[<bibref ref="WS-AddressingWSDL"/>]</td>
           </tr>
           <tr>
             <td>
@@ -1976,9 +1967,9 @@
           http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-ws-addr-core-20060509/. The <loc
             href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-addr-core/">latest version of Web Services Addressing 1.0
             - Core</loc> is available at http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-addr-core. </bibl>
-        <bibl key="WS-Addressing Policy" id="WS-AddressingPolicy"
+        <bibl key="WS-Addressing WSDL Binding" id="WS-AddressingWSDL"
           href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/CR-ws-addr-wsdl-20060529/">
-          <titleref>Web Services Addressing - WSDL Binding</titleref>, M. Gudgin, M. Hadley, T.
+          <titleref>Web Services Addressing 1.0 - WSDL Binding</titleref>, M. Gudgin, M. Hadley, T.
           Rogers and Ü. Yalçinalp, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, 29 May 2006. This version of
           the Web Services Addressing 1.0 - WSDL Binding is
           http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/CR-ws-addr-wsdl-20060529/. The <loc
@@ -2023,16 +2014,16 @@
           href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy/">
           <titleref>&framework.title;</titleref>, A. S. Vedamuthu, D. Orchard, M. Hondo, T.
           Boubez and P. Yendluri, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, &draft.day;,
-          &draft.month; &draft.year;. This version of the specification of the
-          &framework.title; specification is &w3c-designation-framework;. The <loc
+          &draft.month; &draft.year;. This version of the 
+          &framework.title; specification is at http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy/. The <loc
             href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy/">latest version of
             &framework.title;</loc> is available at http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy/. </bibl>
         <bibl id="WS-PolicyAttachment" key="Web Services Policy Attachment"
           href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy-attach/">
           <titleref>&attachment.title;</titleref>, A. S. Vedamuthu, D. Orchard, M. Hondo, T.
           Boubez and P. Yendluri, Editors. World Wide Web Consortium, &draft.day;,
-          &draft.month; &draft.year;. This version of the specification of the
-          &attachment.title; specification is &w3c-designation-attachment;. The <loc
+          &draft.month; &draft.year;. This version of the 
+          &attachment.title; specification is at http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy-attach. The <loc
             href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy-attach/">latest version of
             &attachment.title;</loc> is available at
           http://www.w3.org/TR/ws-policy-attach/. </bibl>
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