2006/ws/policy status-attachment.xml,1.1,1.2 status.xml,1.1,1.2

Update of /sources/public/2006/ws/policy
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv4918/ws/policy

Modified Files:
	status-attachment.xml status.xml 
Log Message:
Status sections used in 2nd public working draft

Index: status-attachment.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/2006/ws/policy/status-attachment.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -d -r1.1 -r1.2
--- status-attachment.xml	31 May 2006 17:20:37 -0000	1.1
+++ status-attachment.xml	23 Sep 2006 02:57:02 -0000	1.2
@@ -8,35 +8,31 @@
   href="http://www.w3.org/TR/">W3C technical reports index</loc> at
   http://www.w3.org/TR/.</emph></p>
 
-  <p>This is the <loc
-  href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/tr.html#first-wd">First
-  Public Working Draft</loc> of the &attachment.title; specification for review
+  <p>This is  an updated Public Working Draft of the &attachment.title; specification for review
   by W3C members and other interested parties. It has been produced by
   the <loc href='http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/'>Web Services
   Policy Working Group</loc>, which is part of the <loc
   href='http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/Activity'>W3C Web Services
-  Activity</loc>.</p>
+  Activity</loc>. A list of <loc href="#change-description">changes in this version of the document</loc> and a <loc href="ws-policy-attachment-diff20060731.html">diff-marked version against the previous version of this document</loc> are available.</p>
 
-  <p>Discussion of this document takes place on the public public <loc
+ <p>Discussion of this document takes place on the public <loc
   href="mailto:public-ws-policy@w3.org">public-ws-policy@w3.org</loc>
   mailing list (<loc
   href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/">public
-  archive</loc>).
-  Comments on this specification should be sent to this mailing list.
+  archive</loc>) and within <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/">Bugzilla</loc>.
+  Comments on this specification should be made following the <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/#issues">Description for Issues</loc> of the Working Group.
   </p>
 
-  <p>
-    Per <loc
-    href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/#sec-Exclusion">section
-    4 of the W3C Patent Policy</loc>, Working Group participants have
-    150 days from the title page date of this document to exclude
-    essential claims from the W3C RF licensing requirements with
-    respect to this document series. Exclusions are with respect to
-    the exclusion reference document, defined by the W3C Patent Policy
-    to be the latest version of a document in this series that is
-    published no later than 90 days after the title page date of this
-    document.
-  </p>
+         <p> This document was produced by a group operating under the
+      <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/">5
+      February 2004 W3C Patent Policy</loc>. W3C maintains a <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2004/01/pp-impl/39293/status">public
+      list of any patent disclosures</loc> made in connection with the
+      deliverables of the group; that page also includes instructions
+      for disclosing a patent. An individual who has actual knowledge
+      of a patent which the individual believes contains <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/#def-essential">Essential
+      Claim(s)</loc> must disclose the information in accordance with
+      <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/#sec-Disclosure">section
+      6 of the W3C Patent Policy</loc>. </p>
 
   <p>
     Publication as a Working Draft does not imply endorsement by the W3C

Index: status.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/2006/ws/policy/status.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -d -r1.1 -r1.2
--- status.xml	31 May 2006 17:20:37 -0000	1.1
+++ status.xml	23 Sep 2006 02:57:03 -0000	1.2
@@ -8,35 +8,31 @@
   href="http://www.w3.org/TR/">W3C technical reports index</loc> at
   http://www.w3.org/TR/.</emph></p>
 
-  <p>This is the <loc
-  href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/tr.html#first-wd">First
-  Public Working Draft</loc> of the &framework.title; specification for review
+  <p>This is an updated Public Working Draft of the &framework.title; specification for review
   by W3C members and other interested parties. It has been produced by
   the <loc href='http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/'>Web Services
   Policy Working Group</loc>, which is part of the <loc
   href='http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/Activity'>W3C Web Services
-  Activity</loc>.</p>
+  Activity</loc>. A list of <loc href="#change-description">changes in this version of the document</loc> and a <loc href="ws-policy-framework-diff20060731.html">diff-marked version against the previous version of this document</loc> are available.</p>
 
-  <p>Discussion of this document takes place on the public public <loc
+  <p>Discussion of this document takes place on the public <loc
   href="mailto:public-ws-policy@w3.org">public-ws-policy@w3.org</loc>
   mailing list (<loc
   href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-policy/">public
-  archive</loc>).
-  Comments on this specification should be sent to this mailing list.
+  archive</loc>) and within <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/">Bugzilla</loc>.
+  Comments on this specification should be made following the <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/policy/#issues">Description for Issues</loc> of the Working Group.
   </p>
 
-  <p>
-    Per <loc
-    href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/#sec-Exclusion">section
-    4 of the W3C Patent Policy</loc>, Working Group participants have
-    150 days from the title page date of this document to exclude
-    essential claims from the W3C RF licensing requirements with
-    respect to this document series. Exclusions are with respect to
-    the exclusion reference document, defined by the W3C Patent Policy
-    to be the latest version of a document in this series that is
-    published no later than 90 days after the title page date of this
-    document.
-  </p>
+         <p> This document was produced by a group operating under the
+      <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/">5
+      February 2004 W3C Patent Policy</loc>. W3C maintains a <loc href="http://www.w3.org/2004/01/pp-impl/39293/status">public
+      list of any patent disclosures</loc> made in connection with the
+      deliverables of the group; that page also includes instructions
+      for disclosing a patent. An individual who has actual knowledge
+      of a patent which the individual believes contains <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/#def-essential">Essential
+      Claim(s)</loc> must disclose the information in accordance with
+      <loc href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/#sec-Disclosure">section
+      6 of the W3C Patent Policy</loc>. </p>
 
   <p>
     Publication as a Working Draft does not imply endorsement by the W3C

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