RE: Suggestion on Part - 2 : Adjuncts

Thank you for the comment.  The Working Group this issue as a CR139 [1] and
fixed it in the latest editor's draft [2].

 

Unless you let us know otherwise within 2 weeks, we will assume you agree
with the resolution of this issue.

 

[1] http://www.w3.org/2002/ws/desc/5/cr-issues/issues.html#CR139  

[2]
http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/~checkout~/2002/ws/desc/wsdl20/wsdl20-adjuncts.html

 

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From: www-ws-desc-request@w3.org [mailto:www-ws-desc-request@w3.org] On
Behalf Of Ramkumar Menon
Sent: Friday, January 05, 2007 7:21 PM
To: www-ws-desc@w3.org
Subject: Suggestion on Part - 2 : Adjuncts

 

Hi Gurus,

 

The Abstract section of Part 2 defines WSDL 2.0 as follows:-

 

"WSDL 2.0 is an XML format for describing network services as a set of
endpoints operating on messages containing either document-oriented or
procedure-oriented information"

 

I had a suggestion - apologies if its not worth it :-)

Maybe we could 

i) Rephrase this definition,  and

ii) Perhaps have one common definition that can be inlined in all parts of
the spec if necessary. [Primer, Part 1 and Part 2]

 

 

In any case,  w.r.t the current definition, I had a few thoughts.

a) "network services" maybe a non-standard term. The term "web services"
itself cd be used. 

b)  The latter part of the definition states --> operating on messages
containing "document oriented information" ---- the usage "document oriented
information" is not very clear to the reader. [though I can understand the
same :-).] 

 

 

 


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