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Part 1 editorial comments

From: Hugo Haas <hugo@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 14 Sep 2004 11:58:12 -0400
To: public-ws-desc-comments@w3.org
Message-ID: <20040914155812.GC25495@w3.org>
Below is a list of typos and editorial fixes I noted in Part 1:
- section 2: s/.e.g/e.g./.
- section 2.1.1: s/and that it resolve/and that it resolves/.
- section 2.4.2: s/such as
  'http://www.w3.org/2004/08/wsdl/in-only'/i.e. when
  ''http://www.w3.org/2004/08/wsdl/in-only' is in use/; indeed, this
  is the only possibility.
- section 2.4.2.1: s/AII/&AII;/ and s/be be/be/.
- section 2.4.3.4: s/whether the operation is safe or not/whether the
  operation is declared to be safe or not/; indeed, safe='false'
  doesn't mean that the operation isn't safe, but that it hasn't been
  declared as such as per 2.4.1.
- section 2.5.1: s/wsdls:token/wsdls:Token/.
- section 2.6.2.1: s/fault attribute information item/ref attribute
  information item/.
- section 2.7.1.1.1: the example is missing the WSDL default
  namespace.
- section 10.1: I don't think that the RDF mapping is a normative
  reference; it is an informative one.
- sections A and A.2: there are editor's notes remaining that should
  be removed.
- section D.1: "This section will provide some rationale for it and
  provide hints on how to work around some scenarios."; they are
  missing.

Regards,

Hugo

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