RE: Comments WS-Choreography Last Call document WD-ws-cdl-10-20041217

I've logged this in bugzilla:
http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=977

>-----Original Message-----
>From: public-ws-chor-request@w3.org 
>[mailto:public-ws-chor-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Tony Fletcher
>Sent: 20 December 2004 11:56
>To: public-ws-chor-comments@w3.org; Public-Ws-Chor-Request 
>List; public-ws-chor@w3.org
>Subject: Comments WS-Choreography Last Call document 
>WD-ws-cdl-10-20041217
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>Submitted by Tony on behalf of Bob Haugen and Monica Martin.
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>PS For future reference which is the correct list / are the 
>correct lists to send Last call Comments to - and is there a 
>preferred style for comments?
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>Best Regards     Tony
>A M Fletcher
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>-----Original Message-----
>From: public-ws-chor-request@w3.org 
>[mailto:public-ws-chor-request@w3.org]
>On Behalf Of Haugen 
>Robert
>Sent: 10 December 2004 20:07
>To: public-ws-chor@w3.org
>Subject: Re: ws-chor 12/8/2004: My Comments through 2.5.2
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>Mostly written by Monica Martin, but agreed to by Bob Haugen 
>(author of the original sentence) here is a clearer 
>replacement for a confusing sentence in section '2.4.9 
>Choreography Finalization' third bullet:
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>Change from: "One "undo" Finalizer Block along with a "close" 
>Finalizer Block to signal that the "undo" Finalizer Block is 
>no longer able to be enabled, that is, the Choreography is now closed."
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>Change to: 
>One "undo" Finalizer Block and one "close" Finalizer Block. If 
>the "close" Finalizer is enabled, then the Choreography will 
>be closed, and the "undo" Finalizer Block can no longer be enabled.
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