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Re: Fwd: [LC Review]

From: Lofton Henderson <lofton@rockynet.com>
Date: Tue, 25 Jul 2006 11:01:03 -0600
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To: Benoit Bezaire <benoit@itedo.com>,WebCGM WG <public-webcgm-wg@w3.org>

It would be easy enough to resolve the comment with a new sentence to begin 
the Abstract, something like:  "WebCGM is a graphics standard optimized for 
Web applications in technical electronic documents, geophysical data 
visualization, and similar fields."  And lightly edit the current first 
paragraph of the Abstract to make it flow better.

-Lofton.


At 10:56 AM 7/24/2006 -0400, Benoit Bezaire wrote:
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>Date: Friday, July 21, 2006, 5:15:53 AM
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>One thing that struck me was how far you have to read before you find out
>what WebCGM actually is. I think that at very least the abstract should
>say what it is. For the uninitiated it is not until section 1.4 that you
>start getting an inkling that it is something to do with 2D graphics.
>
>Steven Pemberton
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>I don't have a strong opinion about this. If Steven would have clicked
>on 'second (errata) release in 2001' found in the Abstract, he would
>have found the information he was looking for. On the other hand, a
>few more lines in the abstract would be easy enough to add.
>
>--
>Regards,
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