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[widgets] P&C Last Call comments, 2

From: Marcin Hanclik <Marcin.Hanclik@access-company.com>
Date: Mon, 1 Jun 2009 00:44:20 +0200
To: "public-webapps@w3.org" <public-webapps@w3.org>
Message-ID: <FAA1D89C5BAF1142A74AF116630A9F2C0A26D782DD@OBEEX01.obe.access-company.com>
EDITORIALs

6.5
via a content elements src attribute.
should be
via a content element's src attribute.

"A default start file must appear at either the ..."
"A default start file" is not an anchor.


6.6
Authoring guideline
"If using [SVG] as an icon format and one intends it to be animated, use declarative animation."
should be
"If using [SVG] as an icon format with an intention for it to be animated, use declarative animation."

6.7
"Over the wire (e.g. over HTTP)..."
Maybe something more descriptive could be invented here, since recently the Web content gets delivered wireless and over HTTP?

6.8
"A widget file extension is the text string .wgt in any case form..."
What about:
A widget file extension is the text string that case-insensitively matches the string ".wgt".

7.
All files and folders, except digital signatures ...
should be
All files and folders, except for the digital signatures ...

7.2
This sections presents three ...
should be
This section presents three ...

The purpose of this "fallback" model is to reduce then number of ...
should be
The purpose of this "fallback" model is to reduce the number of ...

In this case, to find find the ...
should be
In this case, to find the ...

7.3
whose folder-name case-sensitively match the string ...
should be
whose folder-name case-sensitively matches the string ...

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