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Re: [comment] XMLHttpRequest Object - Abstract section

From: Anne van Kesteren <annevk@opera.com>
Date: Fri, 21 Apr 2006 21:37:12 +0200
To: "Karl Dubost" <karl@w3.org>
Cc: "Web APIs WG (public)" <public-webapi@w3.org>
Message-ID: <op.s8dh4aol64w2qv@id-c0020.oslo.opera.com>

On Wed, 12 Apr 2006 08:45:46 +0200, Karl Dubost <karl@w3.org> wrote:
> The abstract section is a bit vague, out of the document context. Maybe  
> because of the "some".

Yeah, I agree.


>  What about?
>
> 	"This specification defines the XMLHttpRequest object, an API that  
> provides additional HTTP client functionality for transferring data  
> between a client and a server."

Used that text. Added some <abbr> too...


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