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RE: EvalTF new Editor Draft available

From: Vivienne CONWAY <v.conway@ecu.edu.au>
Date: Thu, 6 Sep 2012 21:11:46 +0800
To: "Velleman, Eric" <evelleman@bartimeus.nl>, "public-wai-evaltf@w3.org" <public-wai-evaltf@w3.org>
Message-ID: <8AFA77741B11DB47B24131F1E38227A9CAB0E4CAF9@XCHG-MS1.ads.ecu.edu.au>
Hi all

I've found a few small grammatical/typographical things:

Page 10 - 2.1 - the word versions on lines 3&4 should be version - singular

Page 11 - 3. Evaluation Procedure - line 5 - change "or be carried out in parallel" to "or may be carried out in parallel"

Page 13 - 3.1.4 Step 1.d

In the top box, change the "to evaluate for" to "for evaluation".  Just to keep my friend who hates split infinitives happy. :)

I'm really happy with the recent changes - it's looking really good (IMHO).


Regards

Vivienne L. Conway, B.IT(Hons), MACS CT, AALIA(cs)
PhD Candidate & Sessional Lecturer, Edith Cowan University, Perth, W.A.
Director, Web Key IT Pty Ltd.
v.conway@ecu.edu.au
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From: Velleman, Eric [evelleman@bartimeus.nl]
Sent: Wednesday, 5 September 2012 4:46 PM
To: public-wai-evaltf@w3.org
Subject: EvalTF new Editor Draft available

Dear EvalTF,

Please find below the links to the updated editor draft and the diff version. Please review carefully for our Telco this thursday:

<http://www.w3.org/WAI/ER/conformance/ED-methodology-20120904>

Please find in the document indicated in review notes and editor notes where more significant changes have been made in this version. Please also have a look at the Diff version to see exactly what has changed since the previous version.

I hope to send you updated versions of the DoC's before the meeting.

Diff version:

<https://www.w3.org/2007/10/htmldiff?doc1=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2FWAI%2FER%2Fconformance%2FED-methodology-20120827.html&doc2=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2FWAI%2FER%2Fconformance%2FED-methodology-20120904.html>

Kindest regards,

Eric

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