updated draft for discussion

Dear group,

After long delays, there is finally a new document for discussion:

# Reference document with agreed changes:
  - https://w3c.github.io/w3c-waet/WAET.html

# Suggested update for discussion:
  - http://www.w3.org/WAI/ER/WD-AERT/ED-WAET20141215

Note that the suggested update includes significant rewrites for most 
sections, which may have introduced unintended technical inaccuracies. 
This needs to be reviewed and discussed where issues are identified.

Some of the key objectives for this suggested update was to:
  - Provide summaries for each feature, to give people an overview the 
first time they read the document, and to serve as a quick reference 
when people look back at the document (eg. to re-lookup a feature).
  - Tighten up the wording and describe each feature more clearly. For 
example, compare section  "2.1.5 Static code evaluation vs. rendered DOM 
evaluation" with the updated "2.1.5 Content Rendering".
  - Tried to give the headings shorter yet more meaningful titles; an 
attempt to organize the sections in a less arbitrary way; and lots of 
grammar and editorial improvements throughout.


Again, this is just a suggestion for discussion. Please compare these 
two versions and provide your thoughts and comments.

Regards,
   Shadi

-- 
Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/
Activity Lead, W3C/WAI International Program Office
Evaluation and Repair Tools Working Group (ERT WG)
Research and Development Working Group (RDWG)

Received on Wednesday, 18 February 2015 14:07:42 UTC