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Re: Some comments on before and after demo

From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
Date: Sat, 25 Jul 2009 02:13:54 +0200
Message-ID: <4A6A4E42.4020002@w3.org>
To: Sylvie duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
CC: bad task force <public-wai-eo-badtf@w3.org>
Thank you Sylvie, we will process these comments.

Regards,
   Shadi


Sylvie duchateau wrote:
> Hello Shadi and all,
> As agreed on last eo teleconference, I have reviewed the pages at:
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/demos/bad/draft/2009/Overview
> Here are some comments.
> 
> 
>  Review of bad demo pages by Sylvie duchateau
> 
> 
>    [Draft] Before and After Demonstration: Overview
>    <http://www.w3.org/WAI/demos/bad/draft/2009/>
> 
> Is it planned to explain somewhere in this overview page what the 
> anotations are? For example, on the home page of the inaccessible Web 
> site, you see the link "show annotations" which displays an h2 with 
> annotations at the end of the page. For peple new to this suite of 
> documents, it is not clear what those annotations are for and this 
> should be explained somewhere.
> 
> 
>    [DRAFT] Accessibility Barriers Shown in the Demo
>    <http://www.w3.org/WAI/demos/bad/draft/2009/barriers>
> 
>    * Does the list of barriers include all the accessibility problems
>      of each demo page, or does it list only the main problems?
>    * For the list of barriers on the home page, I do not see the
>      problem of the default language of the page which is not specified
>      and the page title which is not really appropriate.
> 
> 
>    In general for all accessible pages
> 
>    * In the page search by topic, the submit buttton has the value "go"
>      and a title "submit". In some cases, screeen readers can read the
>      value in other cases the title of the button. May be the title on
>      the button is not necessary.
> 
> 
>    Accessible home page
>    <http://www.w3.org/WAI/demos/bad/draft/2009/after/home/>
> 
>    * Page title is correct but could be more precise, saying that you
>      are on the home page of the city.
>    * One link text seems to be not really evident: the link leading to
>      the survey says: "take survey". I am not sure that when the link
>      is read with the paragraph beside it, it is evident that this
>      survey relates to city parks.
> 
> 
>    Page citilight survey
>    <http://www.w3.org/WAI/demos/bad/draft/2009/after/survey>
> 
>    * both "submit" buttons to select a topic and to submit the form are
>      entitled the same. It would be more useful if they could be
>      differentiated.
>    * the form submission does not work for me. I get every time an
>      error message telling me that my e-mail address is not valid. It
>      works only when I do not fill out the optional fields with name
>      and e-mail address.
>    * One suggestion : once the form has been submitted add the
>      following to the sentence:
>      Actual sentence: "Thank you for submitting your vote, it has been
>      successfully recorded."
>      Proposal: "Thank you for submitting your vote, it has been
>      successfully recorded. We remind you that this is a fictive survey
>      and it is only for the demonstration."
>    * I don't know if this would work in these demo pages: it may be
>      useful to indicate in the page title that there is still an error
>      or that you have reached the end of the form submission.
>      For example: on the page that says "Thank you for submitting your
>      vote, it has been successfully recorded." the title could be:
>      citylight survey form submitted". On the error page the page title
>      could be: "citylight survey one error on e-mail address".
> 
> 
> Best
> Sylvie
> 

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Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/ |
   WAI International Program Office Activity Lead   |
  W3C Evaluation & Repair Tools Working Group Chair |
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