New chapter 7 draft

Hi,

I updated the editor's draft [1], where I have made a prospective effort  
on ISSUE-59[1] (re-ordering the content). There were two commits, but the  
changesets are pretty hard to read - diff doesn't make it easy to follow  
big chunks moving around.

The first commit was just moving the content around with a new Table of  
Contents but the headings and numbering the same [2]. In the second one  
(the current draft) I edited the headings themselves, renumbered  
everything and rebuilt the outline to match the new structure.

I've mostly avoiding touching the content so far. There are a couple of  
placeholders where I think we need some text, and one for ISSUE-72[2]  
(rationalising the explanation of changes, and the requirements for  
different types of change). The issue has a proposal in its description  
but I haven't done anything in the text, because I am waiting for comments  
on the proposal.

I think we should also move the "Wide Review" and "Implementation  
Experience" pieces into CR, because that is where they get applied, and  
move the recommendation for early testing etc toward the beginning of the  
current "Review and responsibilities" section along with the  
recommendations for early testing etc. and a pointer to the explanations.  
So I haven't moved ISSUE-59 to PENDING REVIEW yet, but comments on what is  
there now and whether I should make these further changes would be  
appreciated.

The "Latest Editor's draft" is  
https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/default/tr.html

I haven't had a proper look at Ian's review yet, but that may lead to some  
more changes.

So there may be another draft at the end of this week, especially if I  
manage to talk to fantasai, who wants to make some changes to the source  
layout so it is easier to read diffs for each commit, or if I find  
inspiration for edits that make the new structure smoother.

[1] https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/840ff6a43e74/tr.html
[2] https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/AB/raw-file/2c13766abd84/tr.html

cheers

Chaals

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Received on Thursday, 12 December 2013 00:04:33 UTC