(Almost) approved (Re: Draft of the Transition Request for the updated CR of tracking-dnt)

Hello Roy and Dave,

The Director approved[1] the publication of the updated CR, but under 
the condition that two edits are made (see below). Can you make those 
edits?

[1] https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/chairs/2017OctDec/0019.html


1) Update the reference to WebIDL to point to the Recommendation instead 
of the editors' draft, i.e., to
https://www.w3.org/TR/2016/REC-WebIDL-1-20161215/

(I tried, but I didn't find a way to do it through ReSpec. But you may 
have more success.)


2) Add the text about changes that was in the transition request also in 
the document itself. It can either be in a separate section "Changes" or 
in the "Status of this document". That text is:

    The client-side scripting API has been rewritten to use fewer
    functions and to return Promises. (These are JavaScript functions
    that scripts in an interactive document or application call to ask
    the user to consent to tracking and to store the answer in the
    browser's storage, as well as to check if the browser's storage
    already contains such a consent.)

    Terminology has been updated to use terms from HTML5.

    The specification now defines how to extend the Tk header (part of
    the HTTP-based protocol), e.g., to comply with possible future legal
    requirements. No such extensions are currently known.

    The ability to add extensions to the DNT header (another part of the 
    HTTP-based protocol) is no longer marked “at risk”, because the
    group considers that this feature cannot be removed.

(The explanations in parentheses were meant for the readers of the 
Transition Request. I'm not sure they are needed in the document itself. 
But I'll let you decide.)



Bert
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