RE: danny: native speaker review of "cool uri" document

Got it, thanks Leo. 

I'll get started right away. 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: public-sweo-ig-request@w3.org 
> [mailto:public-sweo-ig-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Leo Sauermann
> Sent: 06 December 2007 16:25
> To: Danny Ayers
> Cc: W3C SWEO IG
> Subject: danny: native speaker review of "cool uri" document
> 
> 
> Hi Danny,
> 
> thanks for taking up the ball of proofreading the document!
> (after david passed it on :-)
> 
> action item for danny from yesterday's telco:
> http://www.w3.org/2007/12/05-sweo-minutes.html#action01
> 
> Here is the latest version of the document from the SVN we 
> use to author it:
> http://gnowsis.opendfki.de/repos/gnowsis/papers/2006_11_concep
turi/html/cooluris_sweo_note.html
> 
> Please download it and make changes directly in the document, 
> as you think appropriate (with the HTML editor of your choice).
> Try not to change the content or some of the weird terms we 
> use (we had ongoing discussions about "web-resource" and 
> "informaiton resource", these terms are there after discussion).
> 
> Also write down the exact date/time when you download the 
> document, and send me the changed version of the HTML 
> together with the date/time, then I can use SVN-diff to 
> backtrack what changes you did.
> 
> If possible, it would be good to have your review within a week.
> 
> (If you are familiar with SVN, you can also send me a "diff").
> 
> kind regards
> Leo
> 
> 
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