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danny: native speaker review of "cool uri" document

From: Leo Sauermann <leo.sauermann@dfki.de>
Date: Thu, 06 Dec 2007 16:25:23 +0100
Message-ID: <47581463.6030606@dfki.de>
To: Danny Ayers <danny.ayers@gmail.com>
CC: W3C SWEO IG <public-sweo-ig@w3.org>

Hi Danny,

thanks for taking up the ball of proofreading the document!
(after david passed it on :-)

action item for danny from yesterday's telco:
http://www.w3.org/2007/12/05-sweo-minutes.html#action01

Here is the latest version of the document from the SVN we use to author it:
http://gnowsis.opendfki.de/repos/gnowsis/papers/2006_11_concepturi/html/cooluris_sweo_note.html

Please download it and make changes directly in the document, as you
think appropriate (with the HTML editor of your choice).
Try not to change the content or some of the weird terms we use (we had
ongoing discussions about "web-resource" and "informaiton resource",
these terms are there after discussion).

Also write down the exact date/time when you download the document,
and send me the changed version of the HTML together with the date/time,
then I can use SVN-diff to backtrack what changes you did.

If possible, it would be good to have your review within a week.

(If you are familiar with SVN, you can also send me a "diff").

kind regards
Leo


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