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comment: BP Recipes for Publishing RDF Vocabularies - Writing style

From: Karl Dubost <karl@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 15 May 2006 12:19:19 +0900
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Hi,
This is a QA Review comment for "Best Practice Recipes for Publishing
RDF Vocabularies"
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-swbp-vocab-pub-20060314/
Tue, 14 Mar 2006 12:48:26 GMT
1st WD


Often in the document, the editors are writing “this” like in

	This recipe
	This document

Please review the document to remove them as much as possible and  
write directly about the content. It is often a question of rewriting  
the paragraph in such way that it is obvious, the paragraph is about  
this recipe or this document. I gave examples of rewriting in  
previous comments.





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