[svgwg] Pull Request: Copy Editing: Eradicate the usage of informal `you'; clean up surrounding text

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== Copy Editing: Eradicate the usage of informal `you'; clean up 
surrounding text ==
(Ultimately, this commit should not change the meaning of the text.)

Because this is a standard, it is probably best not to employ the 
rather
informal second person, `you'. This commit removes that usage without
descending into overtly bureaucratic language.

Furthermore, as a matter of practicality or even necessity, some of
the nearby text has also been improved (according to this author);
this includes rewording, re-styling, the removal of typos, and the
fixing of grammar.

See https://github.com/w3c/svgwg/pull/294

Received on Tuesday, 15 November 2016 01:34:54 UTC