http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5790 John Arwe <johnarwe@us.ibm.com> changed: What |Removed |Added ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Keywords|hasProposal |editorial --- Comment #2 from John Arwe <johnarwe@us.ibm.com> 2008-06-25 08:32:06 --- f2f consensus to fix as in comment #1. Some editorial suggestions: - tweak comma placement - move (impl-defined) parenthetical to end of sentence - change "should be read" to "to be read" or similar... want the sense of must, without using rfc2219 keywords like must or should. -- Configure bugmail: http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/userprefs.cgi?tab=email ------- You are receiving this mail because: ------- You are the QA contact for the bug.Received on Wednesday, 25 June 2008 08:32:41 GMT
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