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Re: Review of XML-Data

From: Christian De Sainte Marie <csma@fr.ibm.com>
Date: Wed, 30 Sep 2009 15:42:05 +0200
To: Gary Hallmark <gary.hallmark@oracle.com>
Cc: Christian de Sainte Marie <csma@ilog.fr>, RIF WG <public-rif-wg@w3.org>, public-rif-wg-request@w3.org
Message-ID: <OFD373AF42.3F469B00-ONC1257641.004A76F7-C1257641.004B448D@fr.ibm.com>
Gary,

I made the editorial changes you suggested (see below). Thanx.

Gary Hallmark wrote on 28/09/2009 22:17:49:
> 
> Editorial:
> 
> The 2 phrases "XML document" and "XML data source" are used 
> interchangeably. For concreteness and
> without loss of generality, "XML document" should be used consistently 
> throughout.

Done.

> Definition (Instance of the data model). An instance*s* of the data 
> model (remove the *s*)

Corrected.

> I don't understand the "resp." clause in the following:
> <quote>
> child::[prefix:]NAME, resp. child::schema-element([prefix:]NAME), if 
> the, optional, namespace URI in C' s DM-Name is URI and if the local 
> name is NAME.
> </quote>

I changed the sentence to:
"child::[prefix:]NAME (and child::schema-element([prefix:]NAME), if the 
data model instance that contains e is constructed from a PSVI), if the, 
optional, namespace URI in C' s DM-Name is URI and if the local name is 
NAME."

> spelling: forme (should be form)

Ocrrected.

Cheers,

Christian

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