Re: Updated RDFa Lite 1.1 draft

very small editorial details on the changes you made.

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If you want Web authors to be able to talk about *the things* on your page,
you need to create an identifier for *that* thing.
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from the plural form your switch to talking about "that" thing. I think
each thing would be more clear here. "each thing" or "each of these things".


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Just like we create identifiers for parts of a page using the id attribute
in HTML, you can create identifiers for things on a page
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do you think this rephrasing would help?:
you can create identifiers for things *described* on a page
if you agree, this applies to the first example too.

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This identifier is also useful if you want to talk about the thing on
another Web page.
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You might want to emphasize the fact that it is the same thing, like so:
This identifier is also useful if you want to talk about *that same* thing
on another Web page.

Steph.

On Mon, Feb 27, 2012 at 12:55 AM, Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>wrote:

> There is a new time-stamped Editor's Draft for the RDFa Lite
> specification here:
>
> http://www.w3.org/2010/02/**rdfa/drafts/2012/WD-rdfa-lite-**20120227/<http://www.w3.org/2010/02/rdfa/drafts/2012/WD-rdfa-lite-20120227/>
>
> The diff-marked version is here:
>
> http://www.w3.org/2010/02/**rdfa/drafts/2012/WD-rdfa-lite-**
> 20120227/diff-20120131.html<http://www.w3.org/2010/02/rdfa/drafts/2012/WD-rdfa-lite-20120227/diff-20120131.html>
>
> This specification integrates all Working Group decisions made on RDFa
> Lite 1.1 to date, including decisions made during last week's 3rd Last
> Call issue resolving marathon.
>
> -- manu
>
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