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comment on wording at beginning of SPARQL Query Language for RDF

From: Peter F. Patel-Schneider <pfps@research.bell-labs.com>
Date: Wed, 22 Feb 2006 15:32:56 -0500 (EST)
Message-Id: <20060222.153256.68396101.pfps@research.bell-labs.com>
To: public-rdf-dawg-comments@w3.org

I just started reading

	http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-rdf-sparql-query-20060220/

and was brought up short by the poor wording at its very beginning:

	An RDF graph is a set of triples; each triple consists of a subject, a
	predicate and an object. This is defined in RDF Concepts and Abstract
	Syntax [CONCEPTS]. These triples can come from a variety of sources.

Surely better wording can be generated, particularly at this important part of
the document.

Peter F. Patel-Schneider
Received on Wednesday, 22 February 2006 20:33:04 GMT

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