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Re: SPARQL Protocol comments (editorial)

From: Kendall Clark <kendall@monkeyfist.com>
Date: Wed, 26 Oct 2005 11:18:14 -0400
To: Arjohn Kampman <arjohn.kampman@aduna.biz>
Cc: public-rdf-dawg-comments@w3.org
Message-ID: <20051026151814.GN16381@monkeyfist.com>

On 15:08, Wed 26 Oct 05, Arjohn Kampman wrote:
> 
> (comments are on the current editor's draft, revision 1.76)
> 
> The HTTP-POST example (section 2.2.1.11) seems to be malformed: the key
> of the query parameter is part of the URL but the parameter value is
> part of the request body. Probably, the "query" key should be moved from
> the URL to the request body, i.e.:

Ah, so it is. Thanks for this catch. That example is gonna be changed a bit
anyway, but I hadn't noticed this before.

> Further, there are some spelling errors in the document:
> - "compatability" (in Introduction)
> - "consumpution" (twice in section 2.1.4)
> - "negotation" (in title of section 2.2.1.3)

Thanks.

Cheers, 
Kendall
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