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SPARQL Protocol comments (editorial)

From: Arjohn Kampman <arjohn.kampman@aduna.biz>
Date: Wed, 26 Oct 2005 15:08:58 +0200
Message-ID: <435F7FEA.9070305@aduna.biz>
To: public-rdf-dawg-comments@w3.org

(comments are on the current editor's draft, revision 1.76)

The HTTP-POST example (section 2.2.1.11) seems to be malformed: the key
of the query parameter is part of the URL but the parameter value is
part of the request body. Probably, the "query" key should be moved from
the URL to the request body, i.e.:

--------------------------------------------------------------------------
POST /sparql/ HTTP/1.1
Host: my.example
User-agent: sparql-client/0.1
Content-Type: application/x-www-form-encoded
Content-Length: ...

query=EncodedQuery&default-graph-uri=http://another.example/protein-db.rdf
--------------------------------------------------------------------------

Further, there are some spelling errors in the document:
- "compatability" (in Introduction)
- "consumpution" (twice in section 2.1.4)
- "negotation" (in title of section 2.2.1.3)


Regards,

Arjohn

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