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PROV-ISSUE-655 (overview-ducharme): Various comments on Overview from Bob DuCharme [PROV-OVERVIEW]

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PROV-ISSUE-655 (overview-ducharme): Various comments on Overview from Bob DuCharme [PROV-OVERVIEW]

http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/655

Raised by: Simon Miles
On product: PROV-OVERVIEW

Bob DuCharme's comments on PROV-Overview

>From original mail:
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-prov-comments/2013Mar/0013.html

typos: defintions, Dublic (Spinal Tap reference: did you mean "Dubly"?), 
"these these", "that each document on" (that each document is on?),

Table in section 2: In the Document column, several sentences are 
missing periods at the end.

The PROV-DICTIONARY summary should have a few more words about why this 
document exists for the benefit of those reading this document as their 
very first PROV document, because the notion of collection hasn't been 
introduced yet.

PROV-LINKS entry on the table: same comment, but about bundles. (Section 
2 further on has a better short explanation of this document's purpose.)
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