- From: Paolo Missier <Paolo.Missier@ncl.ac.uk>
- Date: Wed, 17 Apr 2013 21:57:03 +0100
- To: "Huynh T.D." <tdh@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
- CC: Luc Moreau <L.Moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>, "public-prov-wg@w3.org" <public-prov-wg@w3.org>
thank you Dong for spotting these -- fixed now. Regards, -Paolo On 15/04/2013 15:07, Huynh T.D. wrote: > Luc, Paolo, > > The typos in PROV-N document I found are detailed below. > Best regards, > > Dong. > > > https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#purpose > A full stop is needed at the end of the 2nd bullet point. > > https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_15 > In the last two expressions, the identifier (i) was given without a prefix, which I felt a bit inconsistent with the previous examples. However, I understand that this might be intentional. > Same for the following examplesm e.g. start, end, etc. > > https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_16 > "..., and [ex:param="a"] are optional attributes." - singular here? Same for several other examples (Examples 12, 13, 14, 17, 18, ...) Please check. > > It'd be more natural to place Example 26 (https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_26) before Example 25, right after the sentence about prov:Plan (and perhaps use ex:pl1 in Example 25). > > https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#expression-bundle-constructor > The first row in the table is incorrect id -> identifier (i.e. not optional) > > https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_30 > "...as an an entity..." - delete the extra "an" > > https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#expression-identifier > "...more permissive syntax then XML..." -> "than" > > https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#document > "Given its status of house keeping construct..." - "house-keeping" (to be consistent with the previous occurrence of the term). "Housekeeping" is a valid word by the way. > > https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/REC-prov-n-20130430/Overview.html#example_45 > Commas suggested around "for instance" in the last sentence. > > -- > Dr T Dong Huynh > Research Fellow > > Web and Internet Science Research Group Tel: +44 (0) 23 8059 3270 > School of Electronics and Computer Science Fax: +44 (0) 23 8059 2783 > University of Southampton Eml: tdh@ecs.soton.ac.uk<mailto:tdh@ecs.soton.ac.uk> > Southampton, SO17 1BJ, UK. -- ----------- ~oo~ -------------- Paolo Missier - Paolo.Missier@newcastle.ac.uk, pmissier@acm.org School of Computing Science, Newcastle University, UK http://www.cs.ncl.ac.uk/people/Paolo.Missier PGP Public key: 0x45596549 - key servers: pool.sks-keyservers.net
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