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Re: prov-overview for review for fpwd (ISSUE-605)

From: Ivan Herman <ivan@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 30 Nov 2012 10:17:00 -0500
Cc: Provenance Working Group WG <public-prov-wg@w3.org>
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To: Paul Groth <p.t.groth@vu.nl>

On Nov 29, 2012, at 12:52 , Paul Groth wrote:

> Hi Ivan,
> 
> Thanks for the comments. I'll integrate them when I go through the document before staging. On the implementations, we have this page: http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/wiki/ProvImplementations

Oh yes, this has more information than just tools. That being said, once the tools are mature, adding them to the 2001/sw/wiki/Tools would be a good idea.

Cheers

Ivan

> 
> which we can change in our final version to the wiki or somewhere else.
> 
> cheers
> Paul
> 
> 
> On Thu, Nov 29, 2012 at 5:20 PM, Ivan Herman <ivan@w3.org> wrote:
> Paul,
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> small comments:
> 
> - the header 'PROV family of documents' appears twice
> - in the list of documents, the first item should say (this document) instead having a circular reference
> - In section 1: 'This instantiated by various serializations' -> 'This is instantiated by various serializations'
> - In section 1: 'To help developers and user create valid provenance' -> 'To help developers and users to create valid provenance'
> - Section 1: refers to the various blocks in the figure, but it does not say anything about 'PROV-LINKS'.
> - The figure is a matter of taste, of course. But I usually look at these figures as, sort of, stacks; for me the figure suggests that the PROV-DM is based on the PROV-DC document. I would probably try to move these somehow on the left side, and leave the PROV-DM block as the base.
> - The remark on Prov-O: "This is intended for the Linked Data and Semantic Web community and is useful for developers wishing to create RDFa mark-up." Did you mean 'RDF mark-up'? I do not think that a restriction on RDFa is necessary or useful here...
> - I am not sure the term 'Roadmap' is the right one for the header of section 2. 'available documents'?
> - In the final version would it be worth making a reference to implementations/tools? A possibility is to link to
> 
> http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/wiki/PROV
> 
> in case you guys fill this with your tools, that is:-) Alternatively, the implementation report may be used as well.
> 
> 
> As for your questions below:
> 
> 
> On Nov 27, 2012, at 09:51 , Paul Groth wrote:
> 
> > Dear all,
> 
> > Questions for the reviewers:
> > - Can this document be released as FPWD?
> 
> Absolutely. Yes
> 
> > - If not, what are the blocking issues?
> > - If yes, are there other issues to work on?
> 
> See my comments above. I do not consider them as blocking.
> 
> Ivan
> 
> >
> > The aim is to vote on FPWD release at the teleconference on Thursday.
> > Can you please confirm you can review the document ahead of the call?
> 
> I think I am late with it, I do this at the airport of San Jose, and it is still early... But I hope it is helpful nevertheless!
> 
> ivan
> 
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> >
> > Thanks,
> > Paul
> >
> > [1] https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/overview/overview.html
> > [2] https://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/605
> >
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> > Dr. Paul Groth (p.t.groth@vu.nl)
> > http://www.few.vu.nl/~pgroth/
> > Assistant Professor
> > - Knowledge Representation & Reasoning Group |
> >   Artificial Intelligence Section | Department of Computer Science
> > - The Network Institute
> > VU University Amsterdam
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> Dr. Paul Groth (p.t.groth@vu.nl)
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> Assistant Professor
> - Knowledge Representation & Reasoning Group | 
>   Artificial Intelligence Section | Department of Computer Science
> - The Network Institute
> VU University Amsterdam


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