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Re: PROV-ISSUE-345 (delineate-constraints): style hinders readability: constraints not separated clearly enough [prov-dm-constraints]

From: Luc Moreau <L.Moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
Date: Thu, 31 May 2012 23:46:47 +0100
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Hi Tim,

The latest Editor's draft has now fixed that problem.

Go to:
http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-constraints.html#derivation-use 


The text that follows inference 5 has a cross-reference to the text that 
precedes the rule
Constraint 17 (generation-uniqueness).

It links to:
http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-constraints.html#generation-uniqueness_text 

preceding Constraint 17.

I trust this addresses your concern.
I am closing this issue, pending your review.

Cheers,
Luc


On 21/05/12 18:51, Timothy Lebo wrote:
> One part to consider is where the anchor "lands" - it does not show the narrative that appears above the constraint.
>
> Ideally, the anchor would be moved to above the narrative, so one could read it without scrolling up.
>
> But I did notice that divs were added to delineate the narrative+constraint. That was the main aspect of this issue (which is addressed).
>
> -TIm
>
> On May 21, 2012, at 11:02 AM, James Cheney wrote:
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>    
>> Hi,
>>
>> I believe this issue has been addressed.  Tim, do you agree with closing it?
>>
>> --James
>>
>> On Apr 11, 2012, at 3:44 PM, Provenance Working Group Issue Tracker wrote:
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>>      
>>> PROV-ISSUE-345 (delineate-constraints): style hinders readability: constraints not separated clearly enough [prov-dm-constraints]
>>>
>>> http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/345
>>>
>>> Raised by: Timothy Lebo
>>> On product: prov-dm-constraints
>>>
>>> http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/ED-prov-dm-20120402/prov-dm-constraints.html#usage-precedes-invalidation
>>>
>>> does not clearly delineate where the discussion for one constraint starts and where the next ends. This makes it unreasonably difficult to read.
>>>
>>> BLOCKER for release as public draft.
>>>
>>> This can be fixed with styling to visually separate the pile of constraints.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>        
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