[poe] Issue: Typos in the PR document of ODRL Information Model 2.2 marked as Model

iherman has just labeled an issue for https://github.com/w3c/poe as "Model":

== Typos in the PR document of ODRL Information Model 2.2 ==
(Recording the issue originally [submitted by email](https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-poe-comments/2018Jan/0000.html) but Shuji Kamitsuna)

Dear Sir and Madam

This is Shuji Kamitsuna@Japan.

I found some possible typos below in the PR document of ODRL Information Model 2.2. at
https://www.w3.org/TR/2018/PR-odrl-model-20180104/

* [ ] Sec. 2.3.1: "the recipient the Rule" might be "the recipient of the Rule". 
* [ ] Sec. 2.3.3, in the Example Use Case: "would the assignee" might be "would be the assignee". 
* [ ] Sec. 2.6: "disjoint will all other..." might be "disjoint with all other...". 
* [ ] Sec. 2.6.7, in the Example Use Case: "will be that the MUST" might be "will be that it MUST" or "will be that he/she MUST". 
* [ ] Sec. 3.3: "a subclass the ODRL Policy class" might be "a subclass of the ODRL Policy class". 

Thank you for the great specification!

Cc: @riannella 


See https://github.com/w3c/poe/issues/288

Received on Sunday, 14 January 2018 08:10:22 UTC