UA: interesting reading on plain language and HIPAA privacy notices

The following two items may be useful as we think about clear wording 
for our human-readable translations of P3P elements:

Why Patients Won’t Understand Their HIPAA Privacy Notices
http://www.privacyrights.org/ar/HIPAA-Readability.htm

Plain Language Principles and Thesaurus
for Making HIPAA Privacy Notices More Readable
http://www.hrsa.gov/language.htm