changes to XML Serialization in response to review comments

I have modified the first part of the XML Serialization document in
response to the reviews.

Diffs are 

http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/wiki/index.php?title=XML_Serialization&diff=12502&oldid=12444

peter

Received on Tuesday, 9 September 2008 16:34:04 UTC