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Re: Additional feedback on the roadmap doc

From: Stephane Boyera <boyera@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 22 Sep 2009 12:01:56 +0200
Message-ID: <4AB8A094.4020203@w3.org>
To: Renjish Kumar <renjish.kumar@gmail.com>
CC: public-mw4d@w3.org
Hi Renjish,

thanks for the extensive review.
I would like to propose that you don't mix in the document the proof 
reading and the comments, as it is very hard to extract the comments.

The proof-reading work is great and having it in the document is helpful.
The comments are more easily discussed outside the document. So please 
in the future, extract them.

For now, i tried to summarize them below (merging those from this 
version, from the one coming from the previous version: 
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-mw4d/2009Aug/0063.html ):

1- Change in structure:
you are proposing to move up the executive summary as the first section, 
and the scope as the 5th section

2- adding a definition section (probably as the second section of the 
doc after the intro ?)

3-restructuring the audience as put in the latest document you sent

did i miss any major comments ?

Renjish Kumar a écrit :
> Hello,
>    Pls. refer the attached doc for additional comments and corrections 
> on the Aug 28 version of the roadmap doc... I am at the 6th section 
> now... So, will be back soon with the final comments soon.... 
> Regards
> Renjish

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