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Re: Feedback till section 4 and objectives revised version

From: Stephane Boyera <boyera@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 27 Aug 2009 16:27:13 +0200
Message-ID: <4A9697C1.1030802@w3.org>
To: Renjish Kumar <renjish.kumar@gmail.com>
CC: public-mw4d@w3.org
Dear Renjish,

thanks a lot for your extensive review o fthe first parts. i integrated 
most of your corrections in the documents except few of them:
- the change in the structure (respective place of scope and exec summary)
- your proposed objectives section, as you were using an old version and 
not the latest one provided by mira.
- the change in the audience section

the first and the third point should be discussed during the september 7 
teleconf to see where is the agreement in the group.
Concerning the second point, please review the new objective session 
provided by mira and online now.

Thanks again for the work


Renjish Kumar a écrit :
> Hello,
>    Attached are my comments and corrections (as track changes) on the 
> roadmap doc till section 4. A revised version of the objectives section 
> is also attached for your reference..... 
> I am still in the process of going through the entire document.... sorry 
> for this late entry after a long break... I was pressed for time due to 
> some personal emergency during the last couple of months... but hope 
> better late than never....
> Regards
> Renjish

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