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Re: Review of section 8

From: Conrad Parker <conrad@metadecks.org>
Date: Tue, 14 Apr 2009 23:49:11 +0900
Message-ID: <dba6c0830904140749g48a5025dqd776ad64ffc3d259@mail.gmail.com>
To: RaphaŽl Troncy <Raphael.Troncy@cwi.nl>
Cc: Silvia Pfeiffer <silviapfeiffer1@gmail.com>, Media Fragment <public-media-fragment@w3.org>, Davy Van Deursen <davy.vandeursen@ugent.be>, Erik Mannens <erik.mannens@ugent.be>
2009/4/14 RaphaŽl Troncy <Raphael.Troncy@cwi.nl>:
> Hi Silvia,
>
>>>> * (minor text change:) first paragraph: replace "There exists already"
>>>> with "There exist already"
>>>
>>> I have overwritten this, as my grammar dictionary told me: "There existS
>>> already ..." + singular
>>
>> "a number of URI schemes" is not singular...
>> Let's also remove the "already", which makes it sound silly.
>
> Arggg, needs a English native here, since I think "a number of" is
> considered as singular.

Suggest: "There are a number of URI schemes which define semantics for
their fragment identifiers."

or just:

"Some existing URI schemes define semantics for fragment identifiers."

Conrad.
Received on Tuesday, 14 April 2009 14:49:55 GMT

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