RE: Headings and blue text for sections 2 and 3

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Felix Sasaki [mailto:fsasaki@w3.org] 
> Sent: 03 December 2007 23:43
> To: Richard Ishida
> Cc: public-i18n-its@w3.org
> Subject: Re: Headings and blue text for sections 2 and 3
> 
> Hi Richard,
> 
> Looks good to me. Some minor proposals:
> 
> "Defining markup for natural language labelling": This does 
> not mention xml:lang any more, so it seems to be something 
> different (not only more
> general) than the original "Providing xml:lang to specify 
> ...". Just wondering if that's OK?
> 
> "Provide a way for authors to annotate arbitrary content 
> using its:span or similar markup." Maybe replace "similar" 
> with "equivalent"? The same for "using xml:lang, or a similar 
> mechanism provided by your document format."

Done. 


> 
> "Provide an ITS Rules document containing  all the ITS rules 
> needed to interpret legacy markup, and identify translate and 
> text segmentation information in your format.": I think here 
> you could add "identify terms", e.g. "and identify translate, 
> terminology and text segmentation information in your format."

Done.

Thanks.
RI

> 
> Cheers,
> 
> Felix
>