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[Bug 3287] Clarity of language in the abstract

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Date: Mon, 24 Jul 2006 10:40:34 +0000
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http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=3287


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------- Comment #4 from fsasaki@w3.org  2006-07-24 10:40 -------
(In reply to comment #3)
> I guess this is the last version?
> http://www.w3.org/International/its/itstagset/itstagset.html#introduction
> 
> Yes my concerns are addressed except one. Do not start both in abstract and
> introduction with "this document". It's a common mistake from W3C editors, we
> already know that it's about this document ;) look at my example when I had
> started to rewrite the intro. :)
> 
> for the rest thanks.
> 
Many thanks, Karl. We will delete "this document" :)

Felix
Edstatus: pending
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