html5/spec-author-view Overview.html,1.1563,1.1564 spec.html,1.1693,1.1694 spec.preprocessed.html,1.545,1.546 the-track-element.html,1.133,1.134

Update of /sources/public/html5/spec-author-view
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv23503

Modified Files:
	Overview.html spec.html spec.preprocessed.html 
	the-track-element.html 
Log Message:
improved precision in wording (whatwg r6459)

[updated by splitter]


Index: Overview.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec-author-view/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.1563
retrieving revision 1.1564
diff -u -d -r1.1563 -r1.1564
--- Overview.html	15 Aug 2011 04:58:14 -0000	1.1563
+++ Overview.html	15 Aug 2011 05:57:03 -0000	1.1564
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@
     <dt>Editor:</dt>
     <dd><a href="mailto:ian@hixie.ch">Ian Hickson</a>, Google, Inc.</dd>
    </dl><p>This specification is available in the following formats: <a href="spec.html">single page HTML</a>, <a href="Overview.html">multipage HTML</a>, <a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/spec/">full specification</a>.
-      This is revision 1.5157.</p> 
+      This is revision 1.5161.</p> 
      <p class="copyright"><a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright">Copyright</a>
    &copy; 2011 <a href="http://www.w3.org/"><abbr title="World Wide
    Web Consortium">W3C</abbr></a><sup>&reg;</sup> (<a href="http://www.csail.mit.edu/"><abbr title="Massachusetts

Index: spec.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec-author-view/spec.html,v
retrieving revision 1.1693
retrieving revision 1.1694
diff -u -d -r1.1693 -r1.1694
--- spec.html	15 Aug 2011 04:58:24 -0000	1.1693
+++ spec.html	15 Aug 2011 05:57:04 -0000	1.1694
@@ -363,7 +363,7 @@
     <dt>Editor:</dt>
     <dd><a href="mailto:ian@hixie.ch">Ian Hickson</a>, Google, Inc.</dd>
    </dl><p>This specification is available in the following formats: <a href="spec.html">single page HTML</a>, <a href="Overview.html">multipage HTML</a>, <a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/spec/">full specification</a>.
-      This is revision 1.5157.</p> 
+      This is revision 1.5161.</p> 
      <p class="copyright"><a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright">Copyright</a>
    © 2011 <a href="http://www.w3.org/"><abbr title="World Wide
    Web Consortium">W3C</abbr></a><sup>®</sup> (<a href="http://www.csail.mit.edu/"><abbr title="Massachusetts
@@ -12271,13 +12271,13 @@
     </td></tr><tr><td><dfn aria-haspopup="true" id="attr-track-kind-keyword-captions" role="button" tabindex="0"><code>captions</code></dfn>
      </td><td><dfn aria-haspopup="true" id="attr-track-kind-captions" role="button" tabindex="0">Captions</dfn>
      </td><td>
-      Transcription or translation of the dialogue, sound effects, relevant musical cues, and other relevant audio information, suitable for when the soundtrack is unavailable (e.g. because it is muted or because the user is deaf).
+      Transcription or translation of the dialogue, sound effects, relevant musical cues, and other relevant audio information, suitable for when the soundtrack is unavailable or not clearly audible (e.g. because it is muted, drowned-out by ambient noise, or because the user is deaf).
       Displayed over the video; labeled as appropriate for the hard-of-hearing.
     </td></tr><tr><td><dfn aria-haspopup="true" id="attr-track-kind-keyword-descriptions" role="button" tabindex="0"><code>descriptions</code></dfn>
      </td><td><dfn aria-haspopup="true" id="attr-track-kind-descriptions" role="button" tabindex="0">Descriptions</dfn>
      </td><td>
-      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <a href="#media-resource" id="media-resource_8">media resource</a>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is unavailable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
-      Synthesized as separate audio track.
+      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <a href="#media-resource" id="media-resource_8">media resource</a>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is obscured, unavailable, or not usable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
+      Synthesized as audio.
     </td></tr><tr><td><dfn aria-haspopup="true" id="attr-track-kind-keyword-chapters" role="button" tabindex="0"><code>chapters</code></dfn>
      </td><td><dfn aria-haspopup="true" id="attr-track-kind-chapters" role="button" tabindex="0">Chapters</dfn>
      </td><td>

Index: spec.preprocessed.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec-author-view/spec.preprocessed.html,v
retrieving revision 1.545
retrieving revision 1.546
diff -u -d -r1.545 -r1.546
--- spec.preprocessed.html	15 Aug 2011 04:58:29 -0000	1.545
+++ spec.preprocessed.html	15 Aug 2011 05:57:09 -0000	1.546
@@ -379,7 +379,7 @@
     <dt>Editor:</dt>
     <dd><a href="mailto:ian@hixie.ch">Ian Hickson</a>, Google, Inc.</dd>
    </dl><p>This specification is available in the following formats: <a href="spec.html">single page HTML</a>, <a href="Overview.html">multipage HTML</a>, <a href="http://dev.w3.org/html5/spec/">full specification</a>.
-      This is revision 1.5157.</p> 
+      This is revision 1.5161.</p> 
      <p class="copyright"><a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright">Copyright</a>
    &#169; 2011 <a href="http://www.w3.org/"><abbr title="World Wide
    Web Consortium">W3C</abbr></a><sup>&#174;</sup> (<a href="http://www.csail.mit.edu/"><abbr title="Massachusetts
@@ -11989,13 +11989,13 @@
     </td></tr><tr><td><dfn id="attr-track-kind-keyword-captions" role="button" tabindex="0" aria-haspopup="true"><code>captions</code></dfn>
      </td><td><dfn id="attr-track-kind-captions" role="button" tabindex="0" aria-haspopup="true">Captions</dfn>
      </td><td>
-      Transcription or translation of the dialogue, sound effects, relevant musical cues, and other relevant audio information, suitable for when the soundtrack is unavailable (e.g. because it is muted or because the user is deaf).
+      Transcription or translation of the dialogue, sound effects, relevant musical cues, and other relevant audio information, suitable for when the soundtrack is unavailable or not clearly audible (e.g. because it is muted, drowned-out by ambient noise, or because the user is deaf).
       Displayed over the video; labeled as appropriate for the hard-of-hearing.
     </td></tr><tr><td><dfn id="attr-track-kind-keyword-descriptions" role="button" tabindex="0" aria-haspopup="true"><code>descriptions</code></dfn>
      </td><td><dfn id="attr-track-kind-descriptions" role="button" tabindex="0" aria-haspopup="true">Descriptions</dfn>
      </td><td>
-      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <a href="#media-resource">media resource</a>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is unavailable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
-      Synthesized as separate audio track.
+      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <a href="#media-resource">media resource</a>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is obscured, unavailable, or not usable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
+      Synthesized as audio.
     </td></tr><tr><td><dfn id="attr-track-kind-keyword-chapters" role="button" tabindex="0" aria-haspopup="true"><code>chapters</code></dfn>
      </td><td><dfn id="attr-track-kind-chapters" role="button" tabindex="0" aria-haspopup="true">Chapters</dfn>
      </td><td>

Index: the-track-element.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec-author-view/the-track-element.html,v
retrieving revision 1.133
retrieving revision 1.134
diff -u -d -r1.133 -r1.134
--- the-track-element.html	15 Aug 2011 04:58:37 -0000	1.133
+++ the-track-element.html	15 Aug 2011 05:57:09 -0000	1.134
@@ -390,13 +390,13 @@
     <tr><td><dfn aria-haspopup="true" id="attr-track-kind-keyword-captions" role="button" tabindex="0"><code>captions</code></dfn>
      <td><dfn aria-haspopup="true" id="attr-track-kind-captions" role="button" tabindex="0">Captions</dfn>
      <td>
-      Transcription or translation of the dialogue, sound effects, relevant musical cues, and other relevant audio information, suitable for when the soundtrack is unavailable (e.g. because it is muted or because the user is deaf).
+      Transcription or translation of the dialogue, sound effects, relevant musical cues, and other relevant audio information, suitable for when the soundtrack is unavailable or not clearly audible (e.g. because it is muted, drowned-out by ambient noise, or because the user is deaf).
       Displayed over the video; labeled as appropriate for the hard-of-hearing.
     <tr><td><dfn aria-haspopup="true" id="attr-track-kind-keyword-descriptions" role="button" tabindex="0"><code>descriptions</code></dfn>
      <td><dfn aria-haspopup="true" id="attr-track-kind-descriptions" role="button" tabindex="0">Descriptions</dfn>
      <td>
-      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <a href="media-elements.html#media-resource" id="media-resource_8">media resource</a>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is unavailable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
-      Synthesized as separate audio track.
+      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <a href="media-elements.html#media-resource" id="media-resource_8">media resource</a>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is obscured, unavailable, or not usable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
+      Synthesized as audio.
     <tr><td><dfn aria-haspopup="true" id="attr-track-kind-keyword-chapters" role="button" tabindex="0"><code>chapters</code></dfn>
      <td><dfn aria-haspopup="true" id="attr-track-kind-chapters" role="button" tabindex="0">Chapters</dfn>
      <td>

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