html5/spec history.html,1.1062,1.1063 obsolete.html,1.1043,1.1044 spec.html,1.1623,1.1624 the-iframe-element.html,1.94,1.95

Update of /sources/public/html5/spec
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv22941

Modified Files:
	history.html obsolete.html spec.html the-iframe-element.html 
Log Message:
improved precision in wording (whatwg r6459)

[updated by splitter]


Index: the-iframe-element.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec/the-iframe-element.html,v
retrieving revision 1.94
retrieving revision 1.95
diff -u -d -r1.94 -r1.95
--- the-iframe-element.html	15 Aug 2011 04:47:03 -0000	1.94
+++ the-iframe-element.html	15 Aug 2011 05:46:23 -0000	1.95
@@ -2596,13 +2596,13 @@
     </td></tr><tr><td><dfn id="attr-track-kind-keyword-captions" title="attr-track-kind-keyword-captions"><code>captions</code></dfn>
      </td><td><dfn id="attr-track-kind-captions" title="attr-track-kind-captions">Captions</dfn>
      </td><td>
-      Transcription or translation of the dialogue, sound effects, relevant musical cues, and other relevant audio information, suitable for when the soundtrack is unavailable (e.g. because it is muted or because the user is deaf).
+      Transcription or translation of the dialogue, sound effects, relevant musical cues, and other relevant audio information, suitable for when the soundtrack is unavailable or not clearly audible (e.g. because it is muted, drowned-out by ambient noise, or because the user is deaf).
       Displayed over the video; labeled as appropriate for the hard-of-hearing.
     </td></tr><tr><td><dfn id="attr-track-kind-keyword-descriptions" title="attr-track-kind-keyword-descriptions"><code>descriptions</code></dfn>
      </td><td><dfn id="attr-track-kind-descriptions" title="attr-track-kind-descriptions">Descriptions</dfn>
      </td><td>
-      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <a href="#media-resource">media resource</a>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is unavailable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
-      Synthesized as separate audio track.
+      Textual descriptions of the video component of the <a href="#media-resource">media resource</a>, intended for audio synthesis when the visual component is obscured, unavailable, or not usable (e.g. because the user is interacting with the application without a screen while driving, or because the user is blind).
+      Synthesized as audio.
     </td></tr><tr><td><dfn id="attr-track-kind-keyword-chapters" title="attr-track-kind-keyword-chapters"><code>chapters</code></dfn>
      </td><td><dfn id="attr-track-kind-chapters" title="attr-track-kind-chapters">Chapters</dfn>
      </td><td>

Index: history.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec/history.html,v
retrieving revision 1.1062
retrieving revision 1.1063
diff -u -d -r1.1062 -r1.1063
--- history.html	15 Aug 2011 04:46:32 -0000	1.1062
+++ history.html	15 Aug 2011 05:46:23 -0000	1.1063
@@ -1287,7 +1287,7 @@
     "fragment identifiers"</a> with the new resource, except that if
     the <a href="urls.html#url">URL</a> of the target of the redirect does not have a
     fragment identifier and the <a href="urls.html#url">URL</a> of the resource that
-    led to the redirect does, then the <a href="urls.html#url">URL</a> of the
+    led to the redirect does, then the fragment identifier of the
     resource that led to the redirect must be propagated to the
     <a href="urls.html#url">URL</a> of the target of the redirect.</p>
 

Index: obsolete.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec/obsolete.html,v
retrieving revision 1.1043
retrieving revision 1.1044
diff -u -d -r1.1043 -r1.1044
--- obsolete.html	15 Aug 2011 04:46:34 -0000	1.1043
+++ obsolete.html	15 Aug 2011 05:46:23 -0000	1.1044
@@ -1782,7 +1782,7 @@
 
   </ul><p class="note">These requirements are a <a href="introduction.html#willful-violation">willful
   violation</a> of the JavaScript specification current at the time
-  of writing (ECMAScript edition 3). The JavaScript specification
+  of writing (ECMAScript edition 5). The JavaScript specification
   requires that the ToBoolean() operator convert all objects to the
   true value, and does not have provisions for objects acting as if
   they were <code title="">undefined</code> for the purposes of

Index: spec.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/html5/spec/spec.html,v
retrieving revision 1.1623
retrieving revision 1.1624
diff -u -d -r1.1623 -r1.1624
--- spec.html	15 Aug 2011 04:46:50 -0000	1.1623
+++ spec.html	15 Aug 2011 05:46:23 -0000	1.1624
@@ -350,7 +350,7 @@
     <a href="Overview.html">single page HTML</a>,
     <a href="spec.html">multipage HTML</a>,
     <a href="author/">web developer edition</a>.
-This is revision 1.5157.
+This is revision 1.5161.
    </p> 
      <p class="copyright"><a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Legal/ipr-notice#Copyright">Copyright</a>
    &#169; 2011 <a href="http://www.w3.org/"><abbr title="World Wide

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