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From: Michael Smith via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2009 07:42:44 +0000
To: public-html-commits@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1MW3oC-0006yA-Md@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /sources/public/html5/markup/elements
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv26632/elements

Modified Files:
	meter.html progress.html 
Log Message:
made refinements to documentation for <meter>


Index: meter.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/meter.html,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6
--- meter.html	29 Jul 2009 07:19:25 -0000	1.5
+++ meter.html	29 Jul 2009 07:42:42 -0000	1.6
@@ -9,61 +9,30 @@
   <div id="attributes">
     <dl>
       <dt id="meter.attrs.min">min</dt>
-      <dd>The lower bound of the range; the <code>max</code>
-        attribute specifies the upper bound. The
-        <code>value</code> attribute specifies the value to have
-        the gauge indicate as the “measured” value.</dd>
+      <dd>The lower bound of the range for the meter.</dd>
     </dl>
     <dl>
       <dt id="meter.attrs.max">max</dt>
-      <dd>Specifies the upper bound.</dd>
+      <dd>The upper bound of the range for the meter.</dd>
     </dl>
     <dl>
       <dt id="meter.attrs.value">value</dt>
-      <dd>Specifies the value to have the gauge indicate as the
-        “measured” value.</dd>
+      <dd>The “measured” value shown by meter.</dd>
     </dl>
     <dl>
       <dt id="meter.attrs.low">low</dt>
-      <dd>The other three attributes can be used to segment the gauge's range into
-   "low", "medium", and "high" parts, and to indicate which part of the gauge
-   is the "optimum" part. The <code>low</code> attribute specifies the range
-   that is considered to be the "low" part, and the
-   <code>high</code> attribute specifies the
-   range that is considered to be the "high" part. The
-   <code>optimum</code> attribute
- gives the
-   position that is "optimum"; if that is higher than the "high" value then
-   this indicates that the higher the value, the better; if it's lower than
-   the "low" mark then it indicates that lower values are better, and
-   naturally if it is in between then it indicates that neither high nor low
-   values are good.</dd>
+      <dd>The point that marks the upper boundary of the “low”
+        segment of the meter.</dd>
     </dl>
     <dl>
       <dt id="meter.attrs.high">high</dt>
-      <dd>The other three attributes can be used to segment the gauge's range into
-   "low", "medium", and "high" parts, and to indicate which part of the gauge
-   is the "optimum" part. The <code>low</code> attribute specifies the range
-   that is considered to be the "low" part, and the <code>high</code> attribute specifies the
-   range that is considered to be the "high" part. The <code>optimum</code> attribute gives the
-   position that is "optimum"; if that is higher than the "high" value then
-   this indicates that the higher the value, the better; if it's lower than
-   the "low" mark then it indicates that lower values are better, and
-   naturally if it is in between then it indicates that neither high nor low
-   values are good.</dd>
-   </dl>
+      <dd>The point that marks the lower boundary of the “high”
+        segment of the meter.</dd>
+    </dl>
     <dl>
       <dt id="meter.attrs.optimum">optimum</dt>
-      <dd>The other three attributes can be used to segment the gauge's range into
-   "low", "medium", and "high" parts, and to indicate which part of the gauge
-   is the "optimum" part. The <code>low</code> attribute specifies the range
-   that is considered to be the "low" part, and the <code>high</code> attribute specifies the
-   range that is considered to be the "high" part. The <code>optimum</code> attribute gives the
-   position that is "optimum"; if that is higher than the "high" value then
-   this indicates that the higher the value, the better; if it's lower than
-   the "low" mark then it indicates that lower values are better, and
-   naturally if it is in between then it indicates that neither high nor low
-   values are good.</dd>
+      <dd>The point that marks the “optimum” position for the
+        meter.</dd>
    </dl>
   </div>
   <!-- examples:
@@ -71,5 +40,4 @@
     fraction of a voting population to have selected a particular
     candidate.
     -->
-  </div>
 </div>

Index: progress.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/html5/markup/elements/progress.html,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6
--- progress.html	29 Jul 2009 07:19:25 -0000	1.5
+++ progress.html	29 Jul 2009 07:42:42 -0000	1.6
@@ -17,13 +17,4 @@
         units are arbitrary and not specified.</dd>
     </dl>
   </div>
-  <div id="details">
-    <p>The progress is either indeterminate, indicating that
-    progress is being made but that it is not clear how much more
-    work remains to be done before the task is complete (for
-    example, because the task is waiting for a remote host to
-    respond), or the progress is a number in the range zero to a
-    maximum, giving the fraction of work that has so far been
-    completed.</p>
-  </div>
 </div>
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