- From: 'Janina Sajka' <janina@rednote.net>
- Date: Fri, 20 Apr 2012 23:06:27 -0400
- To: Cynthia Shelly <cyns@microsoft.com>
- Cc: John Foliot <john@foliot.ca>, "'Benjamin Hawkes-Lewis'" <bhawkeslewis@googlemail.com>, "'Laura Carlson'" <laura.lee.carlson@gmail.com>, "'HTML Accessibility Task Force'" <public-html-a11y@w3.org>, "'Joshue O Connor'" <joshue.oconnor@cfit.ie>, "'Judy Brewer'" <jbrewer@w3.org>, "david100@sympatico.ca" <david100@sympatico.ca>, "'Richard Schwerdtfeger'" <schwer@us.ibm.com>, "'James Nurthen'" <james.nurthen@oracle.com>, "'Leif Halvard Silli'" <xn--mlform-iua@xn--mlform-iua.no>, "'Jonas Sicking'" <jonas@sicking.cc>
1.) In the summary you say: "... so this change will correct the hidden attribute section so it is in accord with the ARIA specification and ARIA functionality." It's a stylistic nit, and I'm not about to fall on any sword, but might you rather have: "... so this change will correct the hidden attribute section to bring it into conformance with the ARIA ..." 2.) In Example 3 of the Rationale section, immediately below the ml, you say: "This example shows a variation of Example 3" Do you actually mean "of Example 2" ? As in "a variation of the former example?" 3.) Immediately above the quote from UAIG 5.7.2 there are several references to the ARIA Working Group. Strictly speaking, of course, there's no such thing. We have an ARIA Team in the PF Working Group. 4.) Missing 'i' in two occurances of 'accessibility' in a para that starts: "UAIG says that hidden elements are not exposed via the accessibiltiy API, ..." 5.) A little further down, a missing 'i' in the word "addition," in a para that starts: "In addtion, UAIG Section 5.5.1. ..." 6.) And still a bit further down, a transposed 'it' in the word 'accessibility' in a para that starts: "When aria-labelledby and aria-describedby reference an element that IS NOT hidden, ..." 7.) In the "Risks" section, a missing 's' in the word "existing" and a missing comma (or perhaps better a long dash) immediately before that word? The sentence in question reads: "There have not been many reports of problems with this the exsiting <label> and aria-labelledby functionality with CSS display:none and visibility:hidden, ..." Cynthia Shelly writes: > Thank you. Changes made. > -- Janina Sajka, Phone: +1.443.300.2200 sip:janina@asterisk.rednote.net Chair, Open Accessibility janina@a11y.org Linux Foundation http://a11y.org Chair, Protocols & Formats Web Accessibility Initiative http://www.w3.org/wai/pf World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)
Received on Saturday, 21 April 2012 03:07:16 UTC