Re: Grammatical fixes for PROF

Abstract, sentence 1: "vocabulary created to allows"

Abstract, sentence 3: "allows for those profile resources have formats..."

Overview of docs on profiles, last bullet is not part of the list.

Introduction, paragraph 2: "and a A profile, such as a profile 
<https://w3c.github.io/dxwg/prof/#dfn-profile> <link to data profile in 
glossary> or perhaps an /application profile/,..."

I figure it needs a careful editorial reading and calling out of items 
like the last above, to get agreement.

-Annette

On 12/5/19 2:56 AM, Nicholas Car wrote:
> Hi Annette,
>
> Can you please provide any direction here? I’d love to at least try 
> and address your concerns before plenary time next week.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Nick
>
>
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>> On 3 Dec 2019, at 2:14 pm, Nicholas Car 
>> <nicholas.car@surroundaustralia.com 
>> <mailto:nicholas.car@surroundaustralia.com>> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Annette,
>>
>> You indicated in your poll response for PROF publication as a NOTE 
>> that you "quickly ran into grammatical errors in places where there 
>> have been disagreements about what we mean”. Can you indicate these 
>> specifically so I can draft a PR to fix them? Of course, in the best 
>> case, you would submit such a PR!
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Nick
>>
>>
>> ______________________________________________________________________________________
>>  
>> kind regards
>> *Nicholas Car*
>> Data Systems Architect at SURROUND Australia Pty Ltd  
>>
>> Address P.O. Box 86, Mawson, Canberra ACT 2607
>> Phone +61 477 560 177 <tel:++61+477+560+177>
>> Email nicholas.car@surroundaustralia.com 
>> <mailto:nicholas.car@surroundaustralia.com>Website 
>> https://www.surroundaustralia.com <https://www.surroundaustralia.com/>
>>
>> *Enhancing Intelligence Within Organisations*
>>
>> /delivering evidence that connects decisions to outcomes/
>>
>>
>>
>
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Lawrence Berkeley National Laboratory