- From: Caroline Burle <cburle@nic.br>
- Date: Thu, 14 Apr 2016 20:13:24 -0300
- To: Phil Archer <phila@w3.org>, Public DWBP WG <public-dwbp-wg@w3.org>, Bernadette Farias Lóscio <bfl@cin.ufpe.br>, Newton Calegari <newton@nic.br>
Phil, thank you so much for doing all that! We are looking forward to our call tomorrow. Kind regards, BP Editors On 14/04/16 16:53, Phil Archer wrote: > Sorry I haven't done more but I have found this a lengthy task. > > After doing some initial mechanical staff-contacty-type changes > described earlier (and merging those), I began the native speaker > review. In doing so, I quickly found that I wanted to make more > substantive changes, which I mustn't do - that's for the editors to > consider, supported by the WG. So, I've been: > > 1. making straightforward "this is how a native speaker would say > that" changes. You can see them all by consulting the diff at [1] > onwards. > > 2. Making separate notes about the changes I *would* make or at least > suggest. > > I will do my best to make further progress before tomorrow's call but > for now, I can go no further. It's been a loonnnng day. > > Phil > > > [1] > http://services.w3.org/htmldiff?doc1=http%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fdwbp%2Fbp.html&doc2=http%3A%2F%2Fphilarcher1.github.io%2Fdwbp%2Fbp.html#dataFormats >
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