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RE: new Privacy Best Practices draft

From: Josh Soref <jsoref@rim.com>
Date: Wed, 6 Jul 2011 13:36:32 -0400
To: "public-device-apis@w3.org" <public-device-apis@w3.org>
Message-ID: <6A252AE18765C3468EF06946F24F0B571FFC47D69F@XCH102CNC.rim.net>
http://dev.w3.org/2009/dap/privacy-practices/


> Examples including choosing the data to share,

s/including/include/

> User decisions work well when the user knows what they are deciding
> about and when they make the decision in context (at the time) -
> earlier decisions may have different effect when making a decision

<effect when> needs some punctuation or a word or something (<period>, <comma>, <semicolon>, "than")

> in real-time there are task-specific

> depending on the user retention choices.

s/user/user's/

> and be able to make choices based on those considerings.

s/considerings/considerations/

> differently.Thus

s/differently.Thus/differently. Thus/

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