- From: Dominique Hazael-Massieux <dom@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 02 Dec 2009 15:46:00 +0100
- To: Robin Berjon <robin@robineko.com>
- Cc: "Tran, Dzung D" <dzung.d.tran@intel.com>, public-device-apis <public-device-apis@w3.org>, "'Ilkka.Oksanen@nokia.com'" <Ilkka.Oksanen@nokia.com>, "'Ingmar.Kliche@telekom.de'" <Ingmar.Kliche@telekom.de>
Le mercredi 02 décembre 2009 à 13:09 +0100, Robin Berjon a écrit : > On Dec 2, 2009, at 04:50 , Tran, Dzung D wrote: > > http://dev.w3.org/2009/dap/camera/Overview.html > • I would put the requirements and use cases in an annex — I think > most people are more interested in the actual API. Done, I agree they were in the way. > • There are indentation issues in the examples, in the source they > have to start flush left otherwise the extra space shows (I guess I > could fix that in ReSpec if people are interested). Fixed in this case; I think it would be useful if ReSpec could detect if code samples were already pre-indented. > • In a number of cases the text says "must" when I think you mean > "MUST". (e.g. "must immediately return a PendingOperation object"). The text now reads "immediately returns" rather than "MUST immediately return"; I guess I am uncomfortable making a conformance requirement with "immediately"; the geolocation API uses lowercase must, fwiw (and in other places, "will return"). Dom
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