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\"Accessibility Supported\" awkward sentence

From: WCAG 2.0 Comment Form <nobody@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 29 Jun 2007 17:43:38 +0000 (GMT)
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Name: Patrick H. Lauke
Email: redux@splintered.co.uk
Document: W2
Item Number: Important New Terms Used in WCAG 2.0
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: \"Accessibility Supported\" awkward sentence
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
3rd para:

\"Authors who don\'t know which technologies or which aspects...should consult documented...\"

Cut out the whole \"who don\'t know\" middle bit.

Proposed Change:
\"Authors should consult documented...\"
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