Intro to the four principles

Name: Patrick H. Lauke
Email: redux@splintered.co.uk
Affiliation: 
Document: W2
Item Number: Organization of the WCAG 2.0 Document
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: Intro to the four principles
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
1st para: \"...around the following four principles. These four principles ...\"



Awkward wording.

Proposed Change:
\"...around the following four principles, which...\"