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Re: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-frame-04

From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
Date: Tue, 5 Dec 2017 15:14:13 +1100
Cc: ops-dir@ietf.org, draft-ietf-httpbis-origin-frame.all@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org, ietf-http-wg@w3.org
Message-Id: <01AB18DA-4791-4C71-A4D2-855AC193A5C8@mnot.net>
To: Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com>
Hi Jouni,

Thanks for the review.

> On 2 Dec 2017, at 5:26 am, Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> wrote:
> Minor Issues: Editorials
> o The document does not pass IDnits.
> ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 2818
>  This is obviously intentional but I did not see any mention of this e.g., in
>  the proto write-up.

FWIW, 2818 is in the downref registry.

> -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 5988
>  This should obviously be 8288 as it obsoletes 5988.

Thanks, fixed in source.

> o line 256         s/clients SHOULD not/clients SHOULD NOT

I see this on line 303 of the .txt of -04; did you see it elsewhere?

> o line 146         s/The origin frame/The ORIGIN frame

Likewise, I see this on line 173 of the .txt -04.

> o line 429    What does "case-normalization" mean? I could not immediately find
> that expression, at least not in the referenced RFC6454. If it means making the
> ORIGIN header values lower case, just state that.

In the referenced spec:

5.  Let uri-host be the host component of the URI, converted to lower
       case (using the i;ascii-casemap collation defined in [RFC4790]).

I've added a reference to the step number to clarify.

Thanks again,

Mark Nottingham   https://www.mnot.net/
Received on Tuesday, 5 December 2017 04:14:44 UTC

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