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From: Ben Laurie <ben@algroup.co.uk>
Date: Fri, 31 May 1996 18:16:21 +0100
Message-Id: <31AF2965.6065@algroup.co.uk>
To: HTTP Working Group <http-wg%cuckoo.hpl.hp.com@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
Still working my way through the beast but here's what has emerged so 
far:

Section 1.3

Under 'semantically transparent':

'When a client makes a request via a semantically transparent cache, it 
would receive...'

should read:

'When a client makes a request via a semantically transparent cache, it 
will receive...'

Or some other form where the tenses agree.

Section 2.1

'#(element)' should be '#element'.

Section 2.2

Although it is obvious, the notation '"a".."z"' has not been defined.

Should tspecials include "#"?

'qdtext         = <any TEXT except <"> and CTLs,
                        but including LWS>'
should read

'qdtext         = <any TEXT except <"> and CTLs>'

Section 3.1

'MUST never send a message with a version indicator which is greater 
than its actual version;'

but, above, the term 'native version' is defined, and not the term 
'actual version'.

Cheers,

Ben (Apache Group member).

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Received on Friday, 31 May 1996 10:11:56 EDT

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