RE: Are these sections are ready for publication?

Hi Lisa,

I note the following sections are missing from “Making content usable for people with cognitive and learning disabilities.” I think they should be included before publication.

  *   Abstract
  *   1. Introduction
  *   5 Use Cases / Persona

There are other missing sections with Editors’ notes about future work. I think that’s okay.

John

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UMass Medical School/E.K. Shriver Center
Director, INDEX Program
Instructor, Family Medicine & Community Health
www.DisabilityInfo.org
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From: lisa.seeman [mailto:lisa.seeman@zoho.com]
Sent: Wednesday, April 11, 2018 1:37 PM
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Subject: Re: Are these sections are ready for publication?

In the appendix- section 5 and section 7 should be an brief introduction with the link for the full section.
All the best

Lisa Seeman

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---- On Wed, 11 Apr 2018 20:33:27 +0300 <lisa.seeman@zoho.com<mailto:lisa.seeman@zoho.com>> wrote ----

Do you think these sections are ready for publication?

  *   The tables of user needs:https://rawgit.com/w3c/coga/master/gap-analysis/table.html<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__rawgit.com_w3c_coga_master_gap-2Danalysis_table.html&d=DwMFaQ&c=WJBj9sUF1mbpVIAf3biu3CPHX4MeRjY_w4DerPlOmhQ&r=CueeOhb9CA5L2yfl16hThwCe1zS5LdHYD5MikPNgKr4&m=fbZE1_KmItlHtOuLWOXSRhW9xZLcbtloUr6SrmDKp0Q&s=_bmEf6llHbhtJKGqomzgeTzmT6XA7n-JK8YJwB4kxJM&e=>
  *   The appendix on making content for people with learning and cognative disabilities rawgit to review the documents, the URL is: https://rawgit.com/w3c/coga/transfer-usable-to-html/content-usable/usable.html<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__rawgit.com_w3c_coga_transfer-2Dusable-2Dto-2Dhtml_content-2Dusable_usable.html&d=DwMFaQ&c=WJBj9sUF1mbpVIAf3biu3CPHX4MeRjY_w4DerPlOmhQ&r=CueeOhb9CA5L2yfl16hThwCe1zS5LdHYD5MikPNgKr4&m=fbZE1_KmItlHtOuLWOXSRhW9xZLcbtloUr6SrmDKp0Q&s=VfvfFW6kno9NWem2G-GrKmU3J-4ZsumLOrUf-UFvw3c&e=>
  *   Also the table of design requirements  the URL is: https://rawgit.com/w3c/coga/transfer-usable-to-html/content-usable/table.html<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__rawgit.com_w3c_coga_transfer-2Dusable-2Dto-2Dhtml_content-2Dusable_table.html&d=DwMFaQ&c=WJBj9sUF1mbpVIAf3biu3CPHX4MeRjY_w4DerPlOmhQ&r=CueeOhb9CA5L2yfl16hThwCe1zS5LdHYD5MikPNgKr4&m=fbZE1_KmItlHtOuLWOXSRhW9xZLcbtloUr6SrmDKp0Q&s=ib0XGgP2kG2OT9k51InoI2Xwmr2wiE5d9kIjT1AUTfI&e=>

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